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OWiNG TO LOVE

The house was old and while I was looking at it, the weather changed …

There was thunders and dense rain … But I remembered, I knew the truth.
Everything seemed terrifying during a dark evening when she went to the house after her work.

She was a pretty young girl, she was sixteen and she was sweet, calm and gracious. She was in love … her heart belonged to Jack, the greengrocer’s son, they had fallen in love. The relationship was so beautiful, so childlike, but the faith reserved them a bad end.

My daughter was poor but she was so beautiful that two weeks later, she married Lord Chester. My wife and I were proud about this marriage, because this event permitted us good food and a comfortable bed.

Our daughter didn’t to marry him … She wanted to go away with Jack because she loved him ……

After a week at the process there were a lot of people and we were with Jack and Lord Chester. At the beginning the Court asked Lord Chester where he was the evening when she was killed …

There were four witnesses that declared that the Lord was in a restaurant with them.

Immediately the Court asked me and my wife the same question and my wife was pale, she was crying …

I stood up and I told …

After my words, my wife shook nervously … So, the police put me in prison and there, I stayed for twenty long years without any visit.

But I knew … Those evenings I listened at my daughter’s screams …

I remembered that my wife’s parents forced her to married me. I loved her, but she didn’t. My wife didn’t want the same luck for her daughter.

So, she killed her …

She killed my only daughter and I took the blame for my wife …!

I loved her, now… I didn’t have anything

Laura Terzo 2C